Maximizing Your Essay Success

After completing your application materials for your primary you can immediately begin working on secondary essays for your top school choices and that would be a strategic approach and also a lot of these questions are available as well on student dr. Network so that’s another reliable source where you can find them also creating an Excel spreadsheet as I mentioned earlier to track schools and deadlines I recommend listing all schools applied to lists the dates that you receive a secondary invitation and the dates the secondaries were submitted and this will help you keep track of your progress for all the schools and to stay focused and motivated through this long process. Find out how to achieve more in your essay with Robotdon.

Another thing you can do to maximize your success is to work with a professional editor and admissions consultant getting advice and editing assistance from an expert rate you will help improve your the quality of your writing and chances of gaining an interview and this can make a significant difference because often when you’re writing these questions you’ve already completed your MCAT and you may have difficulty seeing what they’re unique about you or what you would want to focus on that you haven’t already covered in your am cast application so having an objective outside person can provide you with more ideas and more a more strategic approach but also having people who are experts and who’ve served on missions committees in the past like those of us that accepted our com that can give you an edge in terms of giving you the most successful strategies or ideas or way to approach them so any questions before we move on for those of you listening are there any questions that you have before you move on okay Karen asks how should we address below average stats that’s actually our next webinar yeah yeah that’s a great question I would say with with low average stats it’s really important that your essays and their application be as strategic as possible because you do want to highlight all the other parts of your application besides your stats that make you such an outstanding applicant and also you can be strategic in your essays by explaining and highlighting any any improvements you’ve made.

So if you had a decreasing trend early in college and then you improved on that by changing your study strategies by becoming a straight-a student you’d want to add you know address your self-awareness and how you improve to which admissions professionals love to see because they’re looking for students who are teachable who are going to be the best students for their medical school so when you see that someone has a high level of self-awareness and has demonstrated an impressive level of improvement especially academically or in their MCAT scores that is really helpful to getting you an interview because they do want students who are self-aware and who can adapt to any teaching style because you’re going to come across challenges in medical schools inevitable and people who have overcome those in the past successfully will have a higher chance of getting a you know an interview and in an acceptance when you can demonstrate that.

Chopping Up Sentences

I remember once when I was in the very early days of editing people in place and I was editing the work of a a colleague who my new rather well and I was chopping the sentences up and I was changing the pronouns and I was putting the active voice in which we’ll come to in a moment and I gave it back to him and he was pretty downcast I’ve learnt to be kind and now it was pretty downcast and he says what’s wrong with my writing am i using too many dangling participles and I thought my poor darling you wouldn’t know a dangling possibly hit you between the eyes dangling participle.

I had to look one up on the web to get an example because they’re not very common turning the corner a handsome school building appeared well that’s the dangling participle you don’t actually see a handsome school building turning the corner it was you turned the corner I sort of had some school what they were we won’t worry about dangling participles for any any more time at all because you’re not going to use them the active and passive voice now this is something I think it’s a shame that students aren’t taught early on because it’s one of these things that when you taught it as a kid you kind of think you know it even if you don’t and you can go on using it the active voice shows who’s doing what passive voice hides it for people in the forum arriving in the formal register use it a lot because they don’t want to say I think so they say something like surely it will be Kahn conceded or it is generally agreed and but I’ll give you an example that I think you won’t forget it’s the active voice the in the active voice the subject the Baathists insurgents are doing the action we know what’s happening in the passive voice the subject doesn’t do the action the subject suffers it.

And it’s not clear who’s done it so who did it the Baathist insurgents the American troops is Islamist fundamentalists we don’t know so if you use the passive voice a lot you’re going to believe your readers in the dark about a lot and your writing is going to be unclear so short sentences finite verbs clear pronouns and the active voice this is just some more examples which you can look at when you get them print out of a passive construction changed into an active one I’ve just finished editing an article in which the author’s kept saying you know it is generally agreed or it is generally acknowledged and that’s there were two of them I thought they wouldn’t mind in me putting we think or we conclude but not they wouldn’t have it I went back to these generally concluded I thought well okay if they don’t want people to read their article that’s their look at.

The Academic Charm Effect

You may write about global population and a global warming yes that is it effect of something but what remains controversial so you write several paragraphs about what may be the causes of it so my examples are bullying has multiple long term effects such as ABC yes you already know that you will develop a into a paragraph one of the body paragraphs B into another section and C will be another section okay what you should pay attention to is that our thesis statement is usually one sentence it is usually longer the normal sentence but still you try to summarize if you give this a b c you you try to summarize everything and it is important that a B and C have parallel structure so that you write that you can read the examples yes it is irreversible expansive painful work allows the triggers causes you don’t mix that you don’t say it is expensive. Discover other insights about essay at Edusson.

It allows killing and some people oppose against it yes try not to mix that it will sound better that way okay so at last we come down to writing yes we understand what we need because we have read our instructions we have created an outline and we know how much words we can devote to each section we have made research and we know what we can include and into which section yes so we have all the sources all the tabs are open and we know that to support our idea number two we have to use this source and we start combining all that as we combine all that don’t forget about the use of linking words first they sound very clever yes they sound nice they give the academic charm yes to your essay and they make it more quality right away at about first in addition although in spinal however nevertheless we are very important and don’t forget that Ren was side team something you have to introduce that in a nice way you may use such phrases as according to the VOSA yes or the therapy you call them and you write the information you have found integer sources.

All the very useful words are suggest argues point out I sometimes recommend by students when they get stuck on something yes on some part of their their acids just start yes you’re all so for example car suggests and then you start thinking what does he suggest yes when you begin the sentence this way it already gives you an idea where to water it gives you a nice sentence to present something which should find in academic essays how you can present your citation is the results of the study survey conducted by and you cite the author’s yes show or prove or support the assumption that TV has harmful effect on children for example and so on okay the next person reaching the word count it is mission impossible a lot of students struggle with that and they struggle in two different ways some write too much some write too little and then they start thinking about how to expand that.